Review: Jessica Penot – The Twilight Saint

The Twilight Saint
Jessica Penot
Ailive has been born to be an assassin but is constantly underestimated due to her sex. When she is neutered and saved by her doctor brother she still wants to serve the tribe even as she believes she is being punished for past sins. The betrayal within her tribe undermines her ability to stay unchanged, and then when she wanders as a tribeless she does not know where her feet will take her – unless it is to the university where her love still resides.

Other people on Amazon I saw had complained about the callous killing of a puppy early in her training. To me, it fitted right in with her character. There is so much other blood shed going on that a single puppy-beheading is not going to make a huge difference! I suppose if you don’t have a strong stomach, don’t read this novel as there’s plenty of bloodshed – although not all of it is unnecessary.

I found it quite interesting that the cult formed by her brother seemed a lot like the coming of Jesus Christ and his disciples. If you’ve been reading this blog for a while, you’ll know that I tolerate Christian religion, but don’t have much time for it being the saviour of all things. This cult being formed though seemed like although most people were converted when they were exposed to it, it really was a peaceful conversion, nothing like the Holy Wars and Crusaders of Jerusalem.. This quickly faded though…
This book is not outstanding, but I didn’t feel like it was a waste of my time to read it either. I probably wouldn’t read it again, as the plot lines were quite transperant and nothing really came as a surprise or was intricate enough for me. I think overall I have mixed feelings about this novel. The ending was actually sort of depressing to me. Not in a bad way, and I couldn’t have imagined it ending in any other way, but it was just very sad.

The dialogue in some parts seemed strained, and the flipping between first person perspective of Ailive and what seemed to be an omniscient view, seemed odd. I was occasionally tossed out of the narrative by these things, but in other parts I felt compelled to read and read.

The character development and relationships are what carry this novel along. The travelling and overall theme of ‘the journey’ is also apparent. You have to feel sorry for Ailive, she has made so many mistakes, yet it seems like she will never have peace.

It is concerning (but perhaps a positive sign) that a number of books I have read recently have commented on the inevitability of war and how humans always seem to follow the same paths as they have taken before. This should be thought provoking for people – if one man or one woman can change the outlook of an entire war, then every little bit each of us do in our daily lives could have an effect too.

I would recommend this novel for adults due to the generous amounts of spine snapping and ugly pain. It’s an easy read in terms of language, but it requires a little more out of you if you expect to get some expansion of human knowledge from it.
I received this book free as part of an Amazon promotion. This did not influence my review in any way, and I did not have any correspondance with the author or her managing agency.

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Review: C.S. Dorsey – The Unsacred Gift (Review and Giveaway)

The Unsacred Gift

C.S. Dorsey
Welcome to IO Book Tour’s stop for ‘The Unsacred Gift’.

Sissy has a gift, an unwanted gift. Plagued with visions of people’s deaths, she has isolated herself for years. A visit back home reawakens her worries, and not even her grandmother can sort her out.

The official blurb:

Have you ever had a dream that came to life? How about losing the one you love and  not being able to save them? What about a gift that you were cursed with? Well image having all three like Sicily “Sissy” Monroe.
“Some might say what I have is a gift. I say, I want to return it.” Sissy declares.
 Sicily “Sissy” Monroe has all the qualities of a perfect young lady. She is almost where she wants to be in life. But lying deep in the pupil of her eyes hold something that she cannot get rid of which interferes with her plans. She fights everyday with no one but herself. After having her first vision at age six of her sister’s (Misty) disappearance and the dreams of failing to save her, Sissy wants no part in another person’s fate. For years Sissy tried hard to avoid contact with people because she feared foreseeing their death. In keeping with this, she tries to stay away from her family. Little did Sissy know she could not run from her past, or her gift. She hopes someone will put her out of her misery, but she will soon discover that her visions and dreams were just a mere image of herself.

My review:

I was unable to write a positive review for this novel, and so my review was taken down until the tour is over. My apologies to regular readers. Here it is:

My initial impression of this novel was not positive. I felt confused by the somewhat repetitive beginning, and the kindle format was poorly laid out with the page numbers interspersed in the text. As this is an ARC I guess I shouldn’t be surprised, but it still put me off.

The style of writing seemed very stilted in the first couple of chapters but I held out hoping that there would be an improvement. ‘I was frozen. It was like my body was numb.’ Then some more meaningless clichés. There is so much telling instead of showing, something that really irks me. Sissy talks about greens having a bitter aftertaste. It’s such an unecessary detail. In a more skilled author, those beans might be a metaphor for something else – not here, they just detract from the story.
There was a sudden time jump with no preparation, for a minute I didn’t know what I was reading about. This was 10% of the way into the book. The weird sentences at the beginning of the chapters didn’t do anything for my enjoyment either. I just couldn’t get over how awkward all the text was, particularly the dialogue. There were also some random changes in tenses.
Heaven and Halo for cousins and Sissy and Misty as sisters? Those names are not believable! The twins are the spawn of Satan?? Demonic ways? The tantrum Sissy describes sounds like typical badly behaved children – not demon-possessed.
Sissy’s mother is the most beautiful woman on earth? Also questionable. Sissy says she needs her mom, yet she has barely talked to her mom since she left for college, and her mother getting married is going to destroy what they have – when Sissy hasn’t visited for ages, and she constantly lies to her mother about her feelings?
The overtones of God-talk put me off. Maybe it isn’t something big to other readers, but it certainly didn’t work for me. If Sissy’s God was so good to her, why did she have this ‘gift’? The God talk, including mentions of such things as Sissy’s mother kissing in the dark being a bad and disgusting thing, is just unrealistic and threw me out of the narrative.
Some people see horrific things in their work all the time, not the occasional visions that Sissy has. Emergency room doctors, paramedics. Sometimes it seems like just because Sissy is a sissy she can’t stomach anything. Other things I found that didn’t work for me were the statements about how Sissy’s father will forever be a butt to her and the piranha fish eating the cat that was dumb enough to fall into the fishbowl.
Don’t even let me get started on the ending. I felt so frustrated after reading this book, and I literally felt like I had wasted 3 hours of my life. It’s hard to believe that such an interesting synopsis (which caused me to volunteer for this tour) could fall so short.
I appreciate the fact that it is difficult to write a book, believe me I do, but this book was crap. I think it was even worse than Twice Shy, which I didn’t enjoy either. It would suit an uncritical teenage audience, if anyone.

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About the Author

C. S. Dorsey currently lives in Northern California. She graduated from the University of Phoenix with an Associate’s Degree in Financial Services, and is currently working for a financial institution. She never thought about writing until one day this girl started talking to her in her head and never stop. She has written other young adult books including best selling Lukos Trilogy.


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Review: Travis Berketa – Dark Heart: Images of a City

Dark Heart: Images of a City
Travis Berketa
An unnamed vigilante roams the city, trying to reverse the damage done to a city by people who say ‘so what?’ His decent into madness is inevitable – and in a way, this novella reminds me of Batman!
9208457This is a novella – it took me around an hour to read it. It was fast paced, although there were a couple of sections where I felt the language was awkward. The present tense really drew me into the character.
I liked the way the narrator felt the need to explain himself, but still things went downhill. The journal form that this is written in is ideal for showing the mental deterioration. This is a stream of consciousness book that others might enjoy more than me.
I find it hard to comment on such short books as this one. This novella highlights the shortcomings of the police force, but also reveals what can go wrong when taking the law into your own hands. I can at least say it was thought provoking, although I don’t see myself wielding an iron bar like that any time soon.
Oh the irony. The protagonist just doesn’t seem to notice that sometimes people do care – and he ends up damaging them as well! His mentions of God are equally ironic – something that fits in with my own viewpoint.
The RRP for this novella is $24.95, which to me is way too much for such a slim book. If it was on Amazon for $0.99 I would be far more likely to recommend it to you. For that much, I can recommend a whole other set of books that would no doubt further the same ideas.
There is explicit violence and rape in this book, so I would recommend it only for adults.
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Review: Jeff Sparrow – Money Shot: a journey into porn and censorship

Money Shot: a journey into porn and censorship
Jeff Sparrow
I must admit I felt some trepidation when this book arrived at my doorstep to be reviewed. The lurid pink cover, even the title, didn’t see very appealing to me – despite this being a book I ordered. A book about porn…

15781784I got stuck into the novel just as I promised myself I would though – and it turned out to be an enlightening and interesting journey. I couldn’t say I enjoyed it, but it was interesting.

It’s difficult for me to pick out bits of this novel, because this is a non-fiction book, a genre which I rarely attempt to read and review. Something in this book’s favour is that I did stick with it, and it wasn’t unpleasant like some other non-fiction book I have come across. Sparrow was an engaging writer, and his sense of humour carried the book. The conversational tone, and the individual episodes of speaking to each of the interest groups, worked.
I’ve never really thought about the XXX-stores, other than a passing ‘ew, I could never be caught going in there’, but this book is quite an eyeopener. Chances are, some of the DVDs in there are ones that were never permitted by the Australian registration board.
I had to feel a little sorry for the old men who are described by Sparrow – it seems a little cruel to be picking on them when they are being open about their desires. I agree there is something a little sleazy about the whole idea – but isn’t that what porn is? It’s easy enough to imagine people in cinemas getting off on a screen reel, but I’m sure most people at some point have watched porn in the privacy of their homes.

Zombies, Poppers and Pork is a particularly witty and well written chapter. Sparrow effectively manipulates his reader into feeling negative about Wolstencroft from the beginning, so you aren’t all that shocked to here that he is somehow a libertarian fascist!

Perhaps the most important thing is that there should be a mid-line between porn and complete puritanism. The points Sparrow makes about the Bible Planetshakers, and the natural curiosity of teens are very relevant and somewhat worrying. There is such a thing as good porn!

From nannying the net (internet filters) to predation on children, almost everything about porn in Australia is covered in this book. There are things that some people wouldn’t be interested in reading about, and I did find myself skimming a couple of chapters towards the end (racial porn for example). Do you have an interest in the future of porn, and the worrying ideas of Tony Abbott and completely censoring the net (with filters that also chop out useful sites)? An open mind is a must.

If you are interested into insights about censorship of porn in Australia and learning more about the guidelines that govern its import, this is the book for you. Due to the content, I would recommend it only for adult readers. It would likely be a useful read for people in the porn industry of Australia.

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Review: Patrick Freivald – Twice Shy

 Twice Shy
Patrick Freivald

Ani is dead. That’s nothing new to her or her mom, but the rest of her classmates can’t know or she’ll be incinerated. As a carrier of zombie virus, she won’t ever grow old.

What attracted me to this YA novel was the front cover. Your eyes are immediately drawn to the black corset (just my type of style) and then the boots with the strange feet (which once you read the blurb of it being a zombie novel make sense) and then finally you notice the little white thing sitting next to her.


The concept of Ani being a zombie is introduced slowly and subtly, but if you’ve already read the blurb it’s a bit lost. Something that wasn’t clear to me was that Ani had been infected with zombie virus since she was a baby, yet she only started showing zombie symptoms in the last two years.

The author goes for what seems like sarcasm most of the time, but it just doesn’t do it for me. The humour (is there any?) is just highschool bullying, and I suppose I was supposed to think it was funny that Ani’s mom is dating Mike’s dad.

I wasn’t convineced by Ani’s interactions with her mother at all. The superficial hugs and so forth didn’t really show me that Ani loved her mother – it seemed like her mother was doing everything humanly possible for her, but yet Ani didn’t care. Also Ani’s mother fears becoming a zombie so much that she would kill herself first – which doesn’t fit in with constantly keeping Ani alive.

The ending was pathetic. As I was reading this on a Kindle app, I noticed that at 90% read there was still a lot of story that should have been told. The ending, complete with ‘THE END’ printed on it, was such a let down. It was obvious that it wasn’t going to be a happy ending and I actually found myself hoping she would be incinerated because Ani was so damn annoying.

I thought the point of being a zombie was that they couldn’t feel pain. I didn’t understand how a cut on Ani’s forehead needed extra special attention while she’s cutting herself with razors frequently.

The initial image painted of Ani screamed opposites to me. I had no idea what was happening most of the time. She’s happily pretending to be emo, and then the next minute she wants to rock out to pop music. It seemed to me like music was the key to who she was, as as art, but there was no feeling of backstory – perhaps being creative was linked to being a zombie?

I didn’t like the use of abbreviations by the author, including FML. ZV for zombie virus. Ugh, it seems like an attempt to seem ‘hip’, but it just didn’t work for me.

I would recommend this book for older teens, as it involves mentions of self-harm and foul language that are not necessary for a younger reader to encounter. The self-harm is particularly disturbing, as it’s painted as a release for Ani. The drug use is also not great.

I did not enjoy this book, and I’m not sure I would actually ‘recommend’ it at all. It took me around 3 hours to read, and I wish I could have those 3 hours back. If it had been a book I had bought for myself, not one that I was expecting to review, I probably would have stopped reading after the first chapter or two.

I received this ebook free for an honest review. My review has not been influenced by my correspondence with the author’s management company.

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Review: Laurie Hergenham – the Australian short story

the Australian short story
Laurie Hergenham (ed)
This is a novel I had to read for a literature class. It is not really a novel, as it suggested, it is a collection of short stories. It covers quite a long time period, around 100 years, from Peter Carey to Henry Lawson.

As befitting my usual treatment of literature studies books, I didn’t read all of the short stories in this collection. I read and studied just three: Short Shift Saturday by Gavin Casey, Josie by Vance Palmer and Happiness by Katherine Susannah Prichard.

Short Shift Saturday is a gritty short story written in a realist manner. It’s longer than the other two, and I felt that it was easier to understand and get into the depth of the characters.

Josie is an odd ducky. The whole short story is an odd ducky. It was a bit hard to read, and it certainly wasn’t enjoyable. In a way, it was more disgusting than anything. It makes the point of the outsider in Australian early culture.

Happiness is told from the perspective of an Aboriginal woman. It feels like a setup, and I wasn’t entirely convinced about the authenticity of feeling.

As a whole, I hated the unit of study that this book was part of, and I really didn’t do well on any of it. For this particular assessment, I had jetlag! You can tell it’s been on my mind for a while to review this book, because I went on holiday more than a month ago.

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Review: Liam O’Shiel – Eirelan

Eirelan
Liam O’Shiel

Eirelan is a land under constant attack. Wartime has forced thoughts of the family behind battle plans and wounds with no ending in sight. The characters battle for their survival with no real sense of the future being any brighter. This novel documents how the scales begin to tip, and life is even more on a dagger’s edge.

13173379The perspective changes in the first couple of chapters gave me unhappy feelings – I like to follow one character, or perhaps two, all the way through the novel otherwise I get confused about their names (I do this in real life too). O’Shiel managed it very well, and despite swapping between the characters, I felt like I was getting to know them well and I could keep track of which was which with ease.

I struggled to get a full picture of the novel’s contents. It wasn’t clear to me why Eirelan was being invaded in the first place. The first 200 or so pages built for me an image of a series of ever lasting battles, and an impending final push, but I didn’t see why that was happening. I couldn’t understand why they were fighting, or it was that I didn’t care? I didn’t get a bigger picture, a sense of climax, just a series of small battles which all were destroying the characters’ souls. The dreams that each of the characters had were neatly slipped into the text though. This all improved in the second half of the novel, and I couldn’t put it down.

The dialogue often seemed stilted and artificial, as did some of the scenery descriptions. There were also several instances where I noted far too much listing! At the same time though, the information about how a ship works, and the log entries and so forth were valuable and I enjoyed reading them.

I haven’t really decided how I feel about chapters starting with little quotes/notes/diary entries since I read the ‘Quantum Physics’ book which completely put my off quotes. The diary entries and things work well here though, because often it provides a concrete link between the two flanking chapters. That grounding helped with the perspective changes.

Conor is obsessed with his dream of the cottage and children. I can understand it, but I’m not sure why he feels compelled to bring it up with everyone he meets. Things in Marien’s past are hinted at slowly and subtly, and I really felt like I was guessing correctly – a bit of mystery was good all the way through.

I liked the undertones of Mairin and Conor’s relationship, and the swift decisions that must be made in wartime. It all seemed a little incestuous really because everyone seemed to have known each other for an age before they became partners. That wasn’t a negative for me at all because it made it easier for me to keep track of them.

A sign that I loved this book was that by the time I was nearing the last 200 pages or so I was dreading getting to the end because I loved the characters so much. Why did some of them have to die? Ah yes, the battle scenes were excellent, even though the perspective changed a fair bit there too, and I really wanted to skip ahead to find out what was going to happen next for that particular character.

There are deeper themes in this book too, the endless cycle of war and peace that even our current world seems unable to let go of. It seems to be human nature – but what this novel tries to point out is that we are all humans, and we all are essentially the same when it comes to having families and loving eachother.

I usually love Celtic/Gaelic literature, and I wasn’t disappointed by this novel despite a couple of nit-picky things I have mentioned (as always, I find it easier to comment on the bad rather than the good). It was one of the few Goodreads: First Reads books that I had marked as to-read before I even knew I had won it. I was super excited to receive it in the mail and set about reading it right there and then. It has caused me to neglect other things I should be doing – a sign that it’s a good one!

I’ve marked this book as both fantasy and historical fiction. I don’t think it’s strictly either – although it is  not obvious til the second half of the book, it is set in the future (if I missed it in the first half, it was because I was too engrossed in the characters). Fantasy to me involves magic and impossible things – something that this novel lacks. But then again, it’s not really historical fiction (as far as my limited knowledge tells me), because of the women being allowed to fight (it seems like all of the women are on ships or are Bows) and having political roles. Eirelan sounds almost exactly like Ireland! And at one point, there is a map shown to Marien which has England and other ‘real’ countries on it.

I’d likely recommend this book for adults and teens who like Celtic/Gaelic fiction and enjoy a good battle scene. For some reason it feels to me like a teenage book, but the descriptions of violence make me suggest it is for older teens. I guess there is not as much depth as I expect for a purely adult book, although it is certainly thick enough to be one at almost 800 pages.

4.5 stars from me (from Goodreads) and I can’t wait to read the second novel in this series. Earlier reviews have complained of typos in the kindle copy, the majority of those have been ironed out in my beautiful hard copy with creamy pages.

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The author, Liam O’Shiel, talking about Eirelan

Six months of writing a doctoral dissertation left me desperate to write something for fun. I’d written science fiction on and off for many years and so got started on a science fiction novel set in the future. Then something unusual happened: the story evolved to one set in the chronological future . . . but in the technological past. Not a “nuclear holocaust” tale, but rather a story much further into the future, at a time when nuclear weapons and nearly all the high technology of our own time has faded away. Global warming has given way to the Earth’s natural cooling cycle: an Ice Age approaches in Europe. In the British Isles and Brittany, Gaelic-speaking cultures have survived and even thrived for nearly 1,000 years and now are faced with destruction. Cold brings want, want breeds desperation, desperation spawns violence. The people at the center of “Eirelan” are struggling to survive, yes, but why? Not just to stay alive themselves. They seek to preserve for their children and grandchildren a world of music, poetry, art, craft, and spiritual values, in a word, their heritage passed down through the centuries. Conor and Mairin and Feth and Sean and all the rest, while very different as individuals, yearn for a time of peace and security for those who will come after them. “Eirelan” is their story and to be truthful, it feels as if they told their story to me and I wrote it down. I live part-time in their world, more threatening in some ways than ours, yet more rewarding in some ways too. If you enter their world, I hope you will find it welcoming and exciting. I am continuing to write this saga, whose ending I do not yet know.

Review: Gregory Kuhn – Why Quantum Physicists Don’t Get Fat

Why Quantum Physicists Don’t Get Fat
Gregory Kuhn
This ‘novel’ is a weightloss guideline book. To clarify, I don’t actually need to lose weight, nor have I been actively trying to lose weight (other than reducing portion sizes because I now have a desk job). I have been the size I am now for the last 5 or so years, maybe longer, and I have never been overweight. I’m always interested in various weight things though, as now that I’m in my 20s I don’t want to find overnight I have gained a bunch of weight.
15814165I liked the way the book used a couple of headlining scientist quotes for each chapter. However I got a bit annoyed with them as time went on as it felt like they interrupted the flow of the text, and as relevant as some of them were, other just felt like filler.
Kuhn really is quite sneaky in the way he positions the reader to take his opinion on and follow his weightloss strategies. You find yourself nodding along, and then bam! He hits you with something new. I loved the analogy of the browser for weight loss strategies. Neat! It explained the idea of changing the way you think to lose weight, and changing the strategies you use to do it.
The language is simple to understand and easy to read, even the more theoretical parts. I found myself 20% of the way through the book (thanks Kindle Cloud for telling me where I was up to) and not knowing how I got that far into it! Things went downhill from there though.
Chapter 9 is where the author loses me. He suddenly begins suggesting that our expectation that our parents love us makes the universe make them send us material expressions of love. Now, I agree to some extent that expectations can drive what you have been given, but also that those expectations do not magically change the cosmos. He then goes on to suggest that the real you is making the decisions, which seems a little counter-intuitive  if you imagine that if that was your parents, they can’t be really making the decision sanymore, because it is you who is suggesting to them that they should give you presents.
As a scientist, I can’t accept Chapter 10 either. Those neuropeptides that do signal, which are created when you have a thought, they don’t support the evidence he just presented. Perhaps I’m clinging to old science here (and I’m sure that is what he would suggest), but I have no reason to. The suggestion that my cells have been reprogrammed by years of thinking ‘I’m smart’ to expect to be anything other than being smart is ludicrous. It’s still possible to make stupid decisions, even if you are thinking (or perhaps because you are thinking) ‘I’m smart’. I particularly have a problem with this style of thinking, because it implies that people with mental illnesses have programmed themselves to expect to be sick. If cognitive behaviour therapy (which is aimed at changing the way you intitively think) worked the way this author is suggesting fat busting works, there wouldn’t be any more mental illness.
So you can probably tell that by this point in the book I was feeling pretty irritated at the author. I kept reading though in the hopes that the second half of the book would be better because it was time for part 2.
The conversational tone of this novel made me as the reader feel like it was me alone being talked to. I can imagine that this is something that some people would like, because it brings to mind a supportive figure who is going to help you through your weight-loss goals.
Chapter 12 and 13 make excellent points, and I can understand their relevance. Feelings are a thermometer for your state of being! I do agree that feelings play a powerful role, but not that you can overcome everything with them as the author is suggesting. The author then suggests that because I feel that some of the things he has said are ‘silly’, I either don’t have unwanted weight, or I’m not in enough pain over my weight to try something new.
You must honestly feel good about everything you eat. If you eat the cake, you must truely appreciate it. Don’t eat it, if it doesn’t make you feel good. What this book asks of you is a complete mindset chnge, that even with a manual like this one, is very hard to achieve on your own. It is easy to continue to eat the way you always have, but you now need to feel good about whatever it is you are doing to try lose weight.
I was looking for a real rational approach to losing weight, a handbook of approach, things that I could use to prevent gaining weight. I didn’t find it here, and I didn’t really find anything here particularly worthwhile. This book really seems like another fad ‘diet’ to me – change the way you think, and the weight will magically drop off. Don’t bother reading the whole thing – skip straight to chapter 15-17 with the eating, moving and 6  major points, and you will probably have gotten the most out of this book with the least effort.
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Review: A.J. Conway – My Nova

My Nova
A.J. Conway
Dean Craver has never liked technology. The invention of ‘the Youth’ only serves to prove him right. Dean has to follow a non-nonsensical poem to try and work out what’s going on, but really he has no idea (nor does anyone else on the planet). My Nova is a sci-fi novel.
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I have to admit that the front cover with its neat like poem form thing put me off reading the book. I didn’t understand what it was. It was not until I had read about half the book before I realised the significance of the front cover – indeed it was still a little confusing. But that was the point!
I turned to the first page of the story and was instantly rather confused. My first thought was ‘uh oh, I don’t think I’m going to like this book, I hope it’s not going to be a drag to read’. I then proceeded to get somewhat irritated with the author for using ‘rather’ a million time!
After that slow start, the storyline picked up. I’d say the first 50 or so pages didn’t do anything for me, but then I really got into the story as the action started happening. Indeed, I found it difficult to put down.
The idea of ‘the Youth’ sounded like a totally good idea /sarcasm/. It reminded me a bit of I-Robot, and a little of George Orwell’s 1984 in the potential that these ‘Young’ had to spy on their ‘parents’. The various equipment used to keep the elderly alive reminded me of the movie The Island as well. This novel is not a summation of those things though, the elements Conway has used have been blended into a different whole.
I’m sort of glad that this is a stand-alone book. If it was a trilogy, I would feel more like Dean might survive against all the odds, and I would feel less tension about the situations he finds himself in. Instead, I was compelled to keep reading because I thought he was going to die and lose Nova! Arg! It was gripping to the very end, and in the last 100 or so pages I had trouble concentrating on other things.

I was very unhappy with the ending though. It suddenly felt like the author had stopped editing her work, and that she had forgotten that Nova could talk. Well, that’s the way it read anyway. It was all too neat and dandy, and if some of those circumstances were true, then where the hell were they while the USA was going under? Take my advice, just stop reading it after that final showdown and you’ll feel much more satisfied.

I enjoyed the novel after my initial reservations. Dean was really quite a likeable character, although I felt like a little more background would have been nice. Those darn Carnies! Who would have thought drugging and drinking could lead to such a colourful end?
I found it interesting that the novel was set mainly in New Orleans. Coincidence that they had horrible floods when the levies broke there a couple of years ago? Perhaps. Conway is an Australian author, but I decided to just take her word for it that that was the way the police system and such worked. I can understand why she didn’t set it in Australia – we have too much wide open space for this to actually occur. I did feel a little confused as to whether the rest of the world still existed, and whether the moon mission was acceptable to all of them.
There are a couple of editing niggles that I picked up while reading – they might not bother other people, but they almost always throw me out of reading. There were some incorrect tenses, a couple of ‘it’s’ where there should have been ‘its’ and some typos. I would imagine that these will be improve if a second edition was printed.  All in all, pretty typical of a privately published novel, although editing in professional houses has become far less strict in recent days, much to my dismay.
It’s not clear to me why some technologies are functioning and others aren’t. The things that have artificial intelligence, such as the Youth and the robot digesters are still working, yet none of the other technology is. Perhaps because they were plugged into one main power source, and the Youth are separate entities? This is explained a little more later in the book, but I still felt confused.
I would have liked to see more deadline times for Dean, such as some brief statistics for how long he could survive without dialysis, even with charcoal tablets. As it was, that part of the novel created a impending sense of urgncy – Dean, the one guy who seems to have any chance of stopping the invasion, is dying by slow, vomiting inches. This bit was no doubt informed by Conway’s medical background.
I think it’s a little far to call this ‘the thinking person’s literature’. Yes, it’s a good read, but I wouldn’t have said it was good enough to replace a classic piece of literature like 1984 for apocalyptic scenarios. It’s an enjoyable read to be sure, but probably not a reread for me.
I’d recommend this book for adults, and teenagers. There is a fair bit of foul language, which I think just serves to remind the reader that this novel is a possible outcome of the way our society is developing. There also a large amount of wanton violence against robots and humans alike, so if you don’t like that, perhaps don’t read this book.

I received a free copy in return for an honest review, and was not monetarily compensated in any way for my time. My opinion has not been altered in any way by the provision of this free copy, or any of the correspondence I exchanged with the author.

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The writer, AJ Conway, talking about  My Nova

 ‘My Nova’ was the first novel I ever wrote, originally thought up when I was 13. Eight years later and it still contains those fundamental child-like aspects of sci-fi that we all love: the grey, lifeless future, the narrowing of human contact with one another, and the god complex Mankind develops in response to artificial intelligent design. Despite reviews that place ‘My Nova’ on the same shelf as ‘I, Robot’ or Speilburg’s ‘AI’, its original inspiration was actually from the classic, ‘The Time Machine’, and a brief scene where the Moon was blown apart.

Review: Steve Smallman & Joelle Dreidemy – The Lamb Who Came to Dinner

The Lamb Who Came to Dinner
Steve Smallman & Joelle Dreidemy
It’s cold outside and a little lamb is knocking at the door. The wolf is rather hungry, but he couldn’t possibly eat a frozen lamb, it will give him indigestion! What shall he do?
2886232So you’ve probably realised by now, but this is a kid’s book! I ran into it because I happened to turn on the tv and Bookaboo was on! Bookaboo is awesome, it’s on ABC4Kids and it promotes reading. Bookaboo is a rock-star drum-playing dog who can’t go on stage unless he has had a book read to him. A pretty awesome idea if I ever heard one. I could totally apply that idea to my entire reading life.
I don’t normally review children’s books (I can’t say I read many of them) but this one deserved a special mention. The animation was pretty cool, and the original graphics in the book were very nice. It draws on so many other little children’s novels in ways (reminds me of the three little pigs crossed with Mary had a little lamb), but it is a unique blend. There are even some puns for older readers.
I don’t know how Meatloaf got a job reading this book on the show. I can’t say I’ve ever heard (and recognised) any of his music before, but he does an awesome job of making the story come to life. So awesome! His sound effects are pretty cool too.

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Even if you don’t have kids, you should watch the reading of it with Meatloaf.5star