Review: Isobelle Carmody – Alyzon Whitestarr

Alyzon Whitestarr
Isobelle Carmody

Alyzon is the most boring member of her family. She isn’t artistic, she doesn’t play an instrument and she doesn’t have any interesting physical features. One day she is hit on the head, and wakes up with her senses overwhelmed by smells, real and dubious. She’s a response to a sickness that takes over spirits, and they’re after her… and her sister.

1961314I forget how much I like this novel every time I put it away on the shelf, and then when I pick it up I just can’t stop reading it. It’s fascinating to think that special extensions of senses are just evolution. Let me evolve that way! I wish I had abilities like this. But I wouldn’t want to be able to smell the rotting meat of infected people.

As always, the characters come alive even from the single perspective of Alyzon. This is helped by the fact that we get all of Alyzon’s extended senses telling us (and her) things that other people wouldn’t notice. I like that there is a varied cast, not everyone is boring and mainstream. This reflects the fact that people are different on the inside, even if you can’t see it.

People on GoodReads seem really divided about it. Some hate it, call it boring and awful. Others love it. I can agree that it is often wordy, but it’s part of the story! How else can Alyzon talk about her extended senses? Perhaps it is people reading it as adults. To me, this is a perfect teenage novel, just as it was when I was younger.

I was inspired to read this again because it’s coming out from Ford Street Publishing this year! And when I spoke to Isobelle Carmody (about 3 times in the space of a week), she said she felt like she hadn’t finished with the world of Alyzon. Never mind that Isobelle tends to not want to let go of any of her characters (uh hum, Obernewtyn).

5 stars from me. Did you really expect anything else?

5star

Interview with Valerie Davisson

ValerieDavissonPortraitAn Interview with Valerie Davisson, author of Shattered* and ‘Forest Park’. Stay tuned for my review of ‘Forest Park’ coming soon! *Here’s the link for my review of Shattered

I am reviewing your current set of novels. From your other published novels, are there some that I should absolutely read?
This series is my first! Each book is a new adventure for me as well as my protagonist, Logan McKenna. My other books are non-fiction and poetry.

I both love and hate novels that don’t leave a discrete ending for the reader. Have you ever felt the need to write sequels for specific novels, other than this set?
If I had a standalone novel, I’m sure I would want to know what happens next with the characters – as long as we’re alive we have room for growth and change.

There’s always another novel in the pipeline to write… Tell me about it! Does it have even a working title?
Ahh…yes! I just sketched out the main points for Logan Book 3 and am digging into the research. This one takes her back to Jasper, her home town on the Southern California coast. All I can say now is that it involves sea otters, seduction and salty dogs…

Some advice other writers have given is that your first novel is best sitting in a drawer for a while, because then you feel stronger about chopping up ‘your baby’. Do you still have a copy of your first novel? Whether this was published or unpublished, I need to know!
Great question! SHATTERED: Logan Book 1 is not only my first novel in the series, but my first novel ever! I wanted to see if I could write one. Once I make up my mind, I just do it. I had no idea what I was doing, so went to a writers’ conference in La Jolla, found some experienced people to show me the ropes and off I went. It’s been a roller coaster ride ever since. Why leave something sitting in a drawer?

Do you have a dedicated writing space? How does it meet your writing needs?
I do – it’s an open loft area in my home. I’ve got a drafting table with a large monitor on the top shelf, a comfortable chair in the corner where I can curl up and read drafts sometimes. When I’m in the final writing stages – that final 1,000-words-a-day push, I lock myself in up here, put on headphones, crank up a Tchaikovsky violin concerto or 2 Cellos and everyone knows the “Logan light is on!” I need quiet to juggle all the plot lines in my head, or try to get a line right. I can do white noise – coffee shops are fine – I just can’t carry on a conversation or listen to music with lyrics and write at the same time.

I also find myself working at the kitchen table if no one is home or I’m too lazy to walk up the stairs. It’s closer to the refrigerator…

What is your writing process? Have you ever thought about changing it? Other authors I have interviewed talk about having an outline – post-it notes in an office, or writing in paper journals. Is there something like that in your writing technique? Or is it all digital for you?
This question brings to mind my first attempt at plotting. I taped several large pieces of chart paper together and used different color post-it notes for each character, placing them along the arcs of the story. Needless to say it got too complicated, so I gave it up. But it looked really cool. Made me feel very official.

I next tried Excel to keep track of dates, plot lines and characters – who’s doing what when. Excel works for me once the story gets going.I am the Excel Queen!

In the initial stages, I write and sketch ideas on blank paper-mind mapping, jotting down thoughts as they come to me. Once I decide one thing, everything starts rushing into my head and I have to write fast to get it all down. I can always change it later if something doesn’t work, but I feel lucky that so far the ideas come easily – the patience and skill is in weaving them together.

How do you know when a novel or short story is finished? How do you know to step away and let the story speak for itself?
I read somewhere that a mystery novel should aim for about 65,000 words. So, I had that in the back of my head, but really, it just seems to work itself out. When it’s done, it’s done. I like resolving some big issues, but also leaving room for the characters to continue living their lives, even if we never see them again. But, of course, we will see SOME of them again…

Do you have a preference for ebook or paperback format? This is for both your own reading and your novels.
I was always a person who loved physical books – the feel of a book in my hand or on my lap – wandering through bookstores, selecting books off the shelves with great pleasure. But…in the last few years, almost all of my reading is done on my kindle. It’s lightweight and doesn’t keep my husband up with a bright book light I used to have to use. Also easier to travel with.

Social media is becoming a big thing. How does managing media outlets come into marketing your brand and your books?
Because I did a blog as part of a non-fiction book about conversation salons I wrote a few years ago, I was somewhat familiar with WordPress, so when the publisher wanted me to do an author website and Facebook page, it felt pretty natural. I enjoy posting – just wish I could clone myself. Sometimes it’s hard to find time to write your novel AND your blog posts.

You have answered other sets of interview questions, is there something you wish someone would have asked you? Or conversely, something you wish they hadn’t asked?
One of my favorite questions is which character is my favorite – and it’s usually a toss-up between Tava’e, the massive, Samoan Chess Queen who owns the coffee shop down the hill from Logan at the beach, and Iona Slatterly, the feisty head of security at the Otter Festival in SHATTERED: Logan Book 1. She was modeled after a woman I saw while serving jury duty years ago. Tiny woman marched in wearing skin-tight, hot pink jeans with matching nails and lipstick, over-bleached blonde, towering beehive and drawn on eyebrows. Cigarette dangling out of her mouth. I never got to talk to her, so I reinvented her as Iona in my first novel. She was a kick to write! Lived by her own rules. Heart of gold. Rough around the edges.

Review: Kyra Davis – Just One Lie

Just One Lie
Kyra Davis

Mercy/Melody is the lead singer in a band that’s just gotten a new drummer. When she sees an old one-night stand in the audience she feels like things have come full circle. The jobs and friendships she has to hold down next could be her undoing.

23492689This is the sequel to Just One Night. But I didn’t know that when I picked it up to read it (or otherwise I probably wouldn’t have started it at all). It reads perfectly well as a stand-alone, which is good enough for me with the waiting-line of other novels I want to read!

I can’t say I was particularly interested in it to start off with, just another tale of a poor band that has a lead singer that gets recognition. But then I was hooked in, with plenty of action and variety to keep me there.

I didn’t see this as a love-triangle, otherwise I would have put it down immediately. Often in those situations the guys end up as caricatures, and here they are fleshed out (haha) and actually have their own roles to play. Yes, Mercy feels drawn apart between them, but it doesn’t feel set-up.

There was sex scenes in this. Now, that’s not in the least a bad thing. They’re well-written, not particularly ‘porny’ and add to the sexual and emotional frustration of the characters.

This is quite an emotional novel, or perhaps I was just feeling particularly emotional already when I read it. The things that happen to Melody/Mercy are cruel, dangerous and tempting all at once. I felt myself inhabiting her character, both her triumphs and her falls.

What I would have liked to see more of was the period of her solitude/recovery. I didn’t get a whole story there, and I felt like it could have been a novel all on its own. So many juicy details missed out on!

For a mainstream novel that seems to be way too popular with the heartthrob romance loving crowd, I actually really enjoyed it. It had a spark to get me, and some grit to pull me along. 4 stars from me.

4star

Review: Antonia Senior – The Winter Isles

The Winter Isles
Antonia Senior

Somerled is a young boy when his family first travels to the unforgiving slopes of Scotland. His future doesn’t seem bright, his father loves but doesn’t trust him. His beloved mother keeps standing tall by his side at all points. When he grows to be a warrior, he is able to achieve unbelievable feats in battle.

25838712Honestly, this book almost bored me stupid. Somerled gets into bigger and bigger battles, produces more and more children. The battles are like road humps, they just keep happening. I didn’t finish reading it, and don’t even feel that sorry about it. I have better things to read. If you’re looking for a innovative warrior story, I’d go for Eirelan.

The only light point of this novel was getting the perspectives from the women. It was refreshing to have something other than Somerled’s endless questioning and optimism. The mental voices were crisp and distinct, I could easily tell them apart, and that’s something that is rarely done well.

My history is rusty, even though I generally have some idea of what is going on in the Celtic and Gaelic areas. This novel didn’t fill in any gaps, and I didn’t feel like I got anything out of it. Boring. 2 stars only for its excellent perspective work.

2star

Review: Ann Morgan – Beside Myself

Beside Myself
Anne Morgan

Ellie and Helen swap places. Helen was the leader and Ellie was the follower. But Ellie refuses to swap back. Let with a host of behavioural problems, delinquency and chronic instability, Helen drops into madness, while Ellie lives a life of fame.

The twists and turns in this novel, both in time and perspective, made my head spin. Helen holds onto herself with difficulty, and you can really feel that happening. It’s nicely balanced between inaudible ramblings inside her mind, and outer thoughts that she can’t keep in. Not to mention how she interacts with other people.

Mental illness often runs in families, and this novel reflects that. It’s an interesting expose of how different people cope with being dubbed crazy, or just feeling crazy, or acting crazy because it suits them.

I couldn’t believe the twins’ mother! What a disgusting woman. Not to mention the rest of the family. No one says sorry about anything. Only Nick tries, and even then he is acting for his own purposes. Only the twins are really true to themselves, and even then things are skewed.

I felt completely confused by the ending. Why wasn’t she taking medication? How could things ever remain stable for her? Even with her studio. I can’t say too much here, but I’d love to hear other people’s thoughts. What did you feel about it? Were you satisfied? I was satisfied, yet confused all at the same time.

I got really trapped inside this novel and couldn’t put it down. I’m going to give it 4 stars, although perhaps it should be a generous 3.

4star

Review: Ken Kroes – 2022 (Percipience #1)

2022
Ken Kroes

Hope performs a cunning murder to cover the slip that could destroy the organisation she works for. Olivia tries to finalise a virus. Richard sees the bigger picture. Together they will bring about distruction, both intentional and unintentional.

26870332Ah! The twists! Ah! The turns! Ah! The betrayal! Ah! The suspense! Loved it. I really can’t tell you more about the plot without ruining some things that go one, but please go and get a copy to find out for yourself.

The author worried about me taking apart the science, but it was actually very doable. Some of the things they talked about, such as engineering a virus or breeding humans in a particular way, are doable now. Not that we geneticists would ever admit to it 😉 It also talks about missions to Mars, which are happening now (I think?).

The book promised me romance, but there wasn’t too much of it. It wasn’t enough to stop things from happening, and there wasn’t really any lovey-dovey business to detract from the storyline. Instead it was used as a hold on all of the people, nothing was sacred.

The thing that stopped me giving this book 5 stars was the usual ‘telling, not showing’. Despite the sentences being crafted carefully and being dramatically correct, I felt like they were too dry. I could never really immerse myself in the world, because it was so dry. I’m not sure how better to describe it.

I must say that the world building here was beautiful. I could see Sue’s office, experience the RV lifestyle, and get my mind inside the colonies. Amazing. This is eco-terrorism as a plot device, more well thought out than in the Alex Rider series.

The author warned me that there would be a ‘serving of broccoli’, which is to say it addresses some worrying trends in the current environmental climate (haha, see what I did there?). But that’s not a big issue at all. The main text is used to forward the story, and the notes at the end give us more details if needed. It’s a wakeup that many people need to have.

I can’t wait to read the second and third novels in this series, as they are likely to be a huge change from this one. I fortunately have them sitting on my shelf, so stay tuned for a review.

4star

 

Review: Glenda Millard – Stars at Oktober Bend

Glenda Millard
Stars at Oktober Bend

Alice’s words are broken. Her mind is broken. Her words on the page are broken. She composes poems that are broken. Manny is broken too, by what he has seen. Together, communicating through poems, they start to forge a new future.

The Stars at Oktober Bend | COVER ROUGHS 3 (21 September 2015)Oh god. This is yet another slow paced novel. I just couldn’t get into it. Not only was the pace slow, the way of writing of the novel reminded me of Joyous and Moonbeam, which was another I guess, defective mind story? I didn’t like that novel either. So sue me for appreciating well formed and beautiful descriptive sentences, rather than disordered stream of consciousness.

The blurb has more details in it than what I got from 3/4 of the novel. I didn’t know that Manny’s past was as a soldier. I didn’t know that Alice was damaged from an assault. I get why it’s important to talk about the aftermath of these, but did it have to be so boring? I would have loved flashbacks, or warnings, or anything a little more racy.

On the only positive part of the novel for me was the cover of the novel. Very pretty. The title itself makes very little sense until later in the novel, but the cover is pretty! Those lovely black streaks. That didn’t redeem it enough for me though.

I feel like this is another 1 star from me, which is really disappointing. I have read a number of really good novels lately, and maybe that has set the bar higher. Seriously though, the pace was too slow, the writing was an odd style, and I didn’t finish reading it.

1star

Review: Brandon Sanderson – Mitosis

Mitosis
Brandon Sanderson

This tiny (#1.5) short story occurred in between the first and second novels of the Reckoner’s series (Steelheart and Fireflight respectively).

18966322I remind astounded by the sheer number of convincing magic systems Sanderson can create. There are so many interesting novels about superheroes, it’s hard to stand out.

It’s almost too short to write a review, you don’t really get that much story. It is where David first gets his insights into how the epics work, so it’s valuable in that way.

Since it is a Brandon Sanderson, I’ll give it five stars by default , but it’s just too hard to come up with that much of an opinion. I wasn’t that excited about the extra material in the novel (having read the second one already), but it would be worth it if you’re just starting and reading the novels in series.

5star

Interview with CC Hogan

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An Interview with CC Hogan, author of the Dirt saga (which is filled with dragons!)

If you want more information about his world, go to www.aworldcalleddirt.com

I’m not reviewing your current set of novels. From your other published novels, are there some that I should absolutely read?

Dirt is a bit of a never ending story, but I released a book earlier last year called The Stink. I was brought up in North London in the mid-seventies, a time of much industrial unrest and a time also when attitudes changed.  Young people started to reject the restrictive tenets of their parents and created their own ideas, their own philosophy. If the sixties were a time of protest, the seventies were a time of reinvention.  It was the true time of the teenager as well. Although the teen was invented in the 50s, it was not until the seventies that we got it right.  I suppose it was in the seventies that the modern teen was created.  Look at teens now and they are no different to us back then; we listen to the same type of music, even the same bands, go to the same festivals, drink the same drinks and get into the same sort of trouble.

And then, into the middle of this, landed 1976 – the longest hottest summer ever! We were sixteen, we had finished our exams and were let our of school early, and we had ten weeks to kill.  The Stink is a comedy about one group of five who start a band. It almost goes right, but during the summer, they have to grow up, face racism, homophobia, anti-Semitism, ridicule, love and even a murder. It is not just a caper, it is a little tip of the hat to my own youth too and perhaps it is, in its own way, a letter to my old town.

I both love and hate novels that don’t leave a discrete ending for the reader. Have you ever felt the need to write sequels for specific novels, other than this set? 

I will write one for the Stink, but I haven’t left a cliff hanger.  Dirt, obviously, is full of them.  At up to twelve books long, I need to give people a reason to read the next, but The Stink ends properly – I ain’t going to tell you how, though! I will say that the sequel will be set two years later when the kids are now all eighteen years of age.  They are older, ruder and probably a lot naughtier, and I am going to put them and their band on tour with a pile of punks.  It will be a comedy again, but I am going to make sure that you do not have to read the first book to enjoy it, though it would help.

There’s always another novel in the pipeline to write… Tell me about it! Does it have even a working title?

There are two, or is that three? I want to right a conceptual love story.  Actually, it is just an excuse for me welding together a pile of poems with some self-indulgent passages.  However, I have another book or two in mind.  The Stink, and its potential sequel, are both in a file called The London Novels.  I was brought up in that mad city and I love it.  I worked there for many years in the media business, mixing with crazy people and doing some crazy things.  I would never write an autobiography because, firstly, I am not famous.  More importantly, to make the book interesting, I would have to take the mickey and be insulting to people from my past who were friends.  I am not prepared to do that. But it is a rich source of stories.  So I have both a fake autobiography planned, written by a pretend rock star who is passed his sell-by date, and another book, set around the dives and bars of Soho.  Not sure of a title for either of these yet, but I have a large pile of notes that are staring at me invitingly.

Some advice other writers have given is that your first novel is best sitting in a drawer for a while, because then you feel stronger about chopping up ‘your baby’. Do you still have a copy of your first novel? Whether this was published or unpublished, I need to know!

I have several, not quite finished, sitting up in the loft.  One is around 120,000 words long and is a fairy tale, for adults, set in pre-Christian Russia.  I also have a part written kids story, set on the moon, aimed at 12-year-olds. Oh, and a cartoons series.  Although abandoned, they are not forgotten and were part of my decades-long learning process.  All three, well two of them, are really strong ideas and one day, I will return to them and finish them. It may take another ten years, but I will get there. I have caught the bug now, you see, and in the last couple of years have written over a million words. It is an addiction; it may even be problem!

Do you have a dedicated writing space? How does it meet your writing needs?

I double up as a musician, so unusually for a writer, my computer has three huge monitors for my music software.  My desk is covered with Mexican rugs and I have candles and guitars everywhere.  An espresso machine sits on my right, a bottle of plonk on my left with a bowl of olives, and I always have a bottle of rum somewhere.  Seeing that I am currently writing the second series of Dirt, the three monitors are emblazoned with wallpaper of the main continents of Dirt, so I can’t escape it.  I open Word in the middle screen, Onenote on the right and Photoshop on the left. I also have a big, ancient Wacom tablet. This is an artist’s room. There are paintings on the wall, books on the shelves and it oozes fun and story telling.  I love it.

What is your writing process? Have you ever thought about changing it? Other authors I have interviewed talk about having an outline – post-it notes in an office, or writing in paper journals. Is there something like that in your writing technique? Or is it all digital for you?

I am very digital because I am very computer literate.  I design all my own websites, for instance, with a content management framework called ProcessWire.  My primary tool is Onenote.  Dirt is incredibly complicated.  The story is set over 1000 years and harks back in time 12,000 years. Just to write the novels, I have had to create maps, timelines, family trees, histories, and religions.  I have had to research longbows, hitching up carts, how fast horses travel, how fast ancient boats travel and work out how quickly a dragon can fly.  The result is notes and research that are almost novel length in their own right.  I dread to think how that would have been on paper.

Before I write, I make sure I plan everything, and then when I am writing, and inevitably think of lots nice extra bits, I constantly update my notes.  On the Dirt website, are a list of all the characters so far in the first four books; all taken from my notes.  However, I do plan slightly differently from others.  I like to waffle, so when I create a character, I never put in my notes, “five foot six, c-cup, blond, blue eyes….”  I write, “Silvi is right pain in the arse and though a bit on the short size, is quite able to shove her face up to anyone that annoys her.”  That is a much better character and who gives a damn what her hair colour is!  Anyone who says they can write freeform without planning, is fibbing – probably to themselves. 

Having said that I am digital, if I manage to get a bigger work room at some point, I think I want to buy blackboards or whiteboards to help. I am very expressive and just a little eccentric.  When I write, I speak out loud and when I read back, I often prance around the room performing the book.  Dialogue is very important to me, so I need to make sure that it works and performing is the only true way to do it.  The idea of scribbling on a huge board really appeals!

How do you know when a novel or short story is finished? How do you know to step away and let the story speak for itself?

I don’t!  Well, I know when the story is finished because I normally run out of notes or full wine bottles.  But just because I have written FIN, does not mean the work is over, and as they say, anything might happen in the rewrite! To be really honest, I hit publish when I am exhausted with it!  Trouble is, I really fall in love with my characters and I have big problems letting them go.  Some of them I have had to kill off, just to give me some sleep.

Do you have a preference for ebook or paperback format? This is for both your own reading and your novels.

I always loved paperbacks – never hardbacks as I like to abuse my books and I felt I had to be careful with hardbacks.  Then, several years back, I had problems with my eyes and I gave up reading for fun.  It was nothing terrible, I was just getting headaches and couldn’t seem to get the right glasses.  Buying a tablet, brought me back to books again.  For me now, I don’t really have a preference and for publishing, I will go for whatever people want, within limits. I am not quite up to hand-written illuminated manuscripts!

Social media is becoming a big thing. How does managing media outlets come into marketing your brand and your books?

At the moment, it is vital.  I am an author; therefore, I am poverty stricken. I cannot afford advertising, so social media is my lifeline at the moment. As part of that is the world of the book blogger.  You are an amazing group of people and a couple of you have gone way out their way to help with no returns.  I suppose that is why I like doing things like this interview.  I am a writer, so if I can make this a bit more interesting, even a bit of fun, then we all get something out of it.  That is the secret of good marketing. 

You have answered other sets of interview questions, is there something you wish someone would have asked you? Or conversely, something you wish they hadn’t asked?

My favorite food? First girlfriend?  Actually, not as crazy as it sounds.  When I wrote The Stink, one of the characters, the drummer, is a crazy Irish girl whose nickname is Aroma.  Well, it is called The Stink! It was only when I had finished the book and was drawing the cover that I realised she was my first girlfriend – right down to the hitting the bloke she had fallen in love with and wouldn’t admit it.  I don’t know where she is now as I lost contact in about 1977, but she was really cool and I have some very warm memories of messing around in the park doing everything we had been told not to.  Oh, the food thing.  Did I mention I am also a cook?

Review: Kate Hamer – The Girl in the Red Coat

The Girl in the Red Coat
Kate Hamer

A moment’s lapse of attention and Beth’s daughter Carmel is swept away. As Beth tries to come to terms with her grief, Carmel is in her own story surrounded with adults who don’t care about her.

23289469Carmel is so incredibly dumb. For an 8-year old, hasn’t she been taught about going off with strangers? Even if they do profess to be related, didn’t she ever know how to call other people? Or remember her own phone number? Doesn’t she know how to call the police? Why didn’t she ask to go to the funeral? Ugh. I couldn’t love her.

I felt more sorry for Beth and felt that she was more realistically portrayed. Unfortunately there wasn’t very much of her story, and no depth. How can anyone understand a mother’s grief? Why does she have to move on?

The supernatural in this novel happened too late for me to save it. And really, it just proved the religious righteousness, and then in the end nothing more was made of it. If you read this novel, you’ll understand – but I don’t recommend you read it at all.

I have no complaints about the language, or the world building (although since it is set in what I would call regular times that’s not a big problem). The pacing of this novel was its undoing. Sooooo slow. I tried to keep puttering along with reading it, but nothing significant occurred that anchored me into the reading.

I confess, I did not finish this novel. I have so many other good things to read, I couldn’t force myself to finish it. I got about half-way in, stopped reading for a couple of days, tried to get back into it, and then just read the last three chapters. I can fairly safely say that I didn’t miss anything, since it took a good long many years to get through the rest of the ‘trials and tribulations’.

1star