Review: Ann Morgan – Beside Myself

Beside Myself
Anne Morgan

Ellie and Helen swap places. Helen was the leader and Ellie was the follower. But Ellie refuses to swap back. Let with a host of behavioural problems, delinquency and chronic instability, Helen drops into madness, while Ellie lives a life of fame.

The twists and turns in this novel, both in time and perspective, made my head spin. Helen holds onto herself with difficulty, and you can really feel that happening. It’s nicely balanced between inaudible ramblings inside her mind, and outer thoughts that she can’t keep in. Not to mention how she interacts with other people.

Mental illness often runs in families, and this novel reflects that. It’s an interesting expose of how different people cope with being dubbed crazy, or just feeling crazy, or acting crazy because it suits them.

I couldn’t believe the twins’ mother! What a disgusting woman. Not to mention the rest of the family. No one says sorry about anything. Only Nick tries, and even then he is acting for his own purposes. Only the twins are really true to themselves, and even then things are skewed.

I felt completely confused by the ending. Why wasn’t she taking medication? How could things ever remain stable for her? Even with her studio. I can’t say too much here, but I’d love to hear other people’s thoughts. What did you feel about it? Were you satisfied? I was satisfied, yet confused all at the same time.

I got really trapped inside this novel and couldn’t put it down. I’m going to give it 4 stars, although perhaps it should be a generous 3.

4star

Review: Ken Kroes – 2022 (Percipience #1)

2022
Ken Kroes

Hope performs a cunning murder to cover the slip that could destroy the organisation she works for. Olivia tries to finalise a virus. Richard sees the bigger picture. Together they will bring about distruction, both intentional and unintentional.

26870332Ah! The twists! Ah! The turns! Ah! The betrayal! Ah! The suspense! Loved it. I really can’t tell you more about the plot without ruining some things that go one, but please go and get a copy to find out for yourself.

The author worried about me taking apart the science, but it was actually very doable. Some of the things they talked about, such as engineering a virus or breeding humans in a particular way, are doable now. Not that we geneticists would ever admit to it 😉 It also talks about missions to Mars, which are happening now (I think?).

The book promised me romance, but there wasn’t too much of it. It wasn’t enough to stop things from happening, and there wasn’t really any lovey-dovey business to detract from the storyline. Instead it was used as a hold on all of the people, nothing was sacred.

The thing that stopped me giving this book 5 stars was the usual ‘telling, not showing’. Despite the sentences being crafted carefully and being dramatically correct, I felt like they were too dry. I could never really immerse myself in the world, because it was so dry. I’m not sure how better to describe it.

I must say that the world building here was beautiful. I could see Sue’s office, experience the RV lifestyle, and get my mind inside the colonies. Amazing. This is eco-terrorism as a plot device, more well thought out than in the Alex Rider series.

The author warned me that there would be a ‘serving of broccoli’, which is to say it addresses some worrying trends in the current environmental climate (haha, see what I did there?). But that’s not a big issue at all. The main text is used to forward the story, and the notes at the end give us more details if needed. It’s a wakeup that many people need to have.

I can’t wait to read the second and third novels in this series, as they are likely to be a huge change from this one. I fortunately have them sitting on my shelf, so stay tuned for a review.

4star

 

Review: Glenda Millard – Stars at Oktober Bend

Glenda Millard
Stars at Oktober Bend

Alice’s words are broken. Her mind is broken. Her words on the page are broken. She composes poems that are broken. Manny is broken too, by what he has seen. Together, communicating through poems, they start to forge a new future.

The Stars at Oktober Bend | COVER ROUGHS 3 (21 September 2015)Oh god. This is yet another slow paced novel. I just couldn’t get into it. Not only was the pace slow, the way of writing of the novel reminded me of Joyous and Moonbeam, which was another I guess, defective mind story? I didn’t like that novel either. So sue me for appreciating well formed and beautiful descriptive sentences, rather than disordered stream of consciousness.

The blurb has more details in it than what I got from 3/4 of the novel. I didn’t know that Manny’s past was as a soldier. I didn’t know that Alice was damaged from an assault. I get why it’s important to talk about the aftermath of these, but did it have to be so boring? I would have loved flashbacks, or warnings, or anything a little more racy.

On the only positive part of the novel for me was the cover of the novel. Very pretty. The title itself makes very little sense until later in the novel, but the cover is pretty! Those lovely black streaks. That didn’t redeem it enough for me though.

I feel like this is another 1 star from me, which is really disappointing. I have read a number of really good novels lately, and maybe that has set the bar higher. Seriously though, the pace was too slow, the writing was an odd style, and I didn’t finish reading it.

1star

Review: Brandon Sanderson – Mitosis

Mitosis
Brandon Sanderson

This tiny (#1.5) short story occurred in between the first and second novels of the Reckoner’s series (Steelheart and Fireflight respectively).

18966322I remind astounded by the sheer number of convincing magic systems Sanderson can create. There are so many interesting novels about superheroes, it’s hard to stand out.

It’s almost too short to write a review, you don’t really get that much story. It is where David first gets his insights into how the epics work, so it’s valuable in that way.

Since it is a Brandon Sanderson, I’ll give it five stars by default , but it’s just too hard to come up with that much of an opinion. I wasn’t that excited about the extra material in the novel (having read the second one already), but it would be worth it if you’re just starting and reading the novels in series.

5star

Interview with CC Hogan

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An Interview with CC Hogan, author of the Dirt saga (which is filled with dragons!)

If you want more information about his world, go to www.aworldcalleddirt.com

I’m not reviewing your current set of novels. From your other published novels, are there some that I should absolutely read?

Dirt is a bit of a never ending story, but I released a book earlier last year called The Stink. I was brought up in North London in the mid-seventies, a time of much industrial unrest and a time also when attitudes changed.  Young people started to reject the restrictive tenets of their parents and created their own ideas, their own philosophy. If the sixties were a time of protest, the seventies were a time of reinvention.  It was the true time of the teenager as well. Although the teen was invented in the 50s, it was not until the seventies that we got it right.  I suppose it was in the seventies that the modern teen was created.  Look at teens now and they are no different to us back then; we listen to the same type of music, even the same bands, go to the same festivals, drink the same drinks and get into the same sort of trouble.

And then, into the middle of this, landed 1976 – the longest hottest summer ever! We were sixteen, we had finished our exams and were let our of school early, and we had ten weeks to kill.  The Stink is a comedy about one group of five who start a band. It almost goes right, but during the summer, they have to grow up, face racism, homophobia, anti-Semitism, ridicule, love and even a murder. It is not just a caper, it is a little tip of the hat to my own youth too and perhaps it is, in its own way, a letter to my old town.

I both love and hate novels that don’t leave a discrete ending for the reader. Have you ever felt the need to write sequels for specific novels, other than this set? 

I will write one for the Stink, but I haven’t left a cliff hanger.  Dirt, obviously, is full of them.  At up to twelve books long, I need to give people a reason to read the next, but The Stink ends properly – I ain’t going to tell you how, though! I will say that the sequel will be set two years later when the kids are now all eighteen years of age.  They are older, ruder and probably a lot naughtier, and I am going to put them and their band on tour with a pile of punks.  It will be a comedy again, but I am going to make sure that you do not have to read the first book to enjoy it, though it would help.

There’s always another novel in the pipeline to write… Tell me about it! Does it have even a working title?

There are two, or is that three? I want to right a conceptual love story.  Actually, it is just an excuse for me welding together a pile of poems with some self-indulgent passages.  However, I have another book or two in mind.  The Stink, and its potential sequel, are both in a file called The London Novels.  I was brought up in that mad city and I love it.  I worked there for many years in the media business, mixing with crazy people and doing some crazy things.  I would never write an autobiography because, firstly, I am not famous.  More importantly, to make the book interesting, I would have to take the mickey and be insulting to people from my past who were friends.  I am not prepared to do that. But it is a rich source of stories.  So I have both a fake autobiography planned, written by a pretend rock star who is passed his sell-by date, and another book, set around the dives and bars of Soho.  Not sure of a title for either of these yet, but I have a large pile of notes that are staring at me invitingly.

Some advice other writers have given is that your first novel is best sitting in a drawer for a while, because then you feel stronger about chopping up ‘your baby’. Do you still have a copy of your first novel? Whether this was published or unpublished, I need to know!

I have several, not quite finished, sitting up in the loft.  One is around 120,000 words long and is a fairy tale, for adults, set in pre-Christian Russia.  I also have a part written kids story, set on the moon, aimed at 12-year-olds. Oh, and a cartoons series.  Although abandoned, they are not forgotten and were part of my decades-long learning process.  All three, well two of them, are really strong ideas and one day, I will return to them and finish them. It may take another ten years, but I will get there. I have caught the bug now, you see, and in the last couple of years have written over a million words. It is an addiction; it may even be problem!

Do you have a dedicated writing space? How does it meet your writing needs?

I double up as a musician, so unusually for a writer, my computer has three huge monitors for my music software.  My desk is covered with Mexican rugs and I have candles and guitars everywhere.  An espresso machine sits on my right, a bottle of plonk on my left with a bowl of olives, and I always have a bottle of rum somewhere.  Seeing that I am currently writing the second series of Dirt, the three monitors are emblazoned with wallpaper of the main continents of Dirt, so I can’t escape it.  I open Word in the middle screen, Onenote on the right and Photoshop on the left. I also have a big, ancient Wacom tablet. This is an artist’s room. There are paintings on the wall, books on the shelves and it oozes fun and story telling.  I love it.

What is your writing process? Have you ever thought about changing it? Other authors I have interviewed talk about having an outline – post-it notes in an office, or writing in paper journals. Is there something like that in your writing technique? Or is it all digital for you?

I am very digital because I am very computer literate.  I design all my own websites, for instance, with a content management framework called ProcessWire.  My primary tool is Onenote.  Dirt is incredibly complicated.  The story is set over 1000 years and harks back in time 12,000 years. Just to write the novels, I have had to create maps, timelines, family trees, histories, and religions.  I have had to research longbows, hitching up carts, how fast horses travel, how fast ancient boats travel and work out how quickly a dragon can fly.  The result is notes and research that are almost novel length in their own right.  I dread to think how that would have been on paper.

Before I write, I make sure I plan everything, and then when I am writing, and inevitably think of lots nice extra bits, I constantly update my notes.  On the Dirt website, are a list of all the characters so far in the first four books; all taken from my notes.  However, I do plan slightly differently from others.  I like to waffle, so when I create a character, I never put in my notes, “five foot six, c-cup, blond, blue eyes….”  I write, “Silvi is right pain in the arse and though a bit on the short size, is quite able to shove her face up to anyone that annoys her.”  That is a much better character and who gives a damn what her hair colour is!  Anyone who says they can write freeform without planning, is fibbing – probably to themselves. 

Having said that I am digital, if I manage to get a bigger work room at some point, I think I want to buy blackboards or whiteboards to help. I am very expressive and just a little eccentric.  When I write, I speak out loud and when I read back, I often prance around the room performing the book.  Dialogue is very important to me, so I need to make sure that it works and performing is the only true way to do it.  The idea of scribbling on a huge board really appeals!

How do you know when a novel or short story is finished? How do you know to step away and let the story speak for itself?

I don’t!  Well, I know when the story is finished because I normally run out of notes or full wine bottles.  But just because I have written FIN, does not mean the work is over, and as they say, anything might happen in the rewrite! To be really honest, I hit publish when I am exhausted with it!  Trouble is, I really fall in love with my characters and I have big problems letting them go.  Some of them I have had to kill off, just to give me some sleep.

Do you have a preference for ebook or paperback format? This is for both your own reading and your novels.

I always loved paperbacks – never hardbacks as I like to abuse my books and I felt I had to be careful with hardbacks.  Then, several years back, I had problems with my eyes and I gave up reading for fun.  It was nothing terrible, I was just getting headaches and couldn’t seem to get the right glasses.  Buying a tablet, brought me back to books again.  For me now, I don’t really have a preference and for publishing, I will go for whatever people want, within limits. I am not quite up to hand-written illuminated manuscripts!

Social media is becoming a big thing. How does managing media outlets come into marketing your brand and your books?

At the moment, it is vital.  I am an author; therefore, I am poverty stricken. I cannot afford advertising, so social media is my lifeline at the moment. As part of that is the world of the book blogger.  You are an amazing group of people and a couple of you have gone way out their way to help with no returns.  I suppose that is why I like doing things like this interview.  I am a writer, so if I can make this a bit more interesting, even a bit of fun, then we all get something out of it.  That is the secret of good marketing. 

You have answered other sets of interview questions, is there something you wish someone would have asked you? Or conversely, something you wish they hadn’t asked?

My favorite food? First girlfriend?  Actually, not as crazy as it sounds.  When I wrote The Stink, one of the characters, the drummer, is a crazy Irish girl whose nickname is Aroma.  Well, it is called The Stink! It was only when I had finished the book and was drawing the cover that I realised she was my first girlfriend – right down to the hitting the bloke she had fallen in love with and wouldn’t admit it.  I don’t know where she is now as I lost contact in about 1977, but she was really cool and I have some very warm memories of messing around in the park doing everything we had been told not to.  Oh, the food thing.  Did I mention I am also a cook?

Review: Kate Hamer – The Girl in the Red Coat

The Girl in the Red Coat
Kate Hamer

A moment’s lapse of attention and Beth’s daughter Carmel is swept away. As Beth tries to come to terms with her grief, Carmel is in her own story surrounded with adults who don’t care about her.

23289469Carmel is so incredibly dumb. For an 8-year old, hasn’t she been taught about going off with strangers? Even if they do profess to be related, didn’t she ever know how to call other people? Or remember her own phone number? Doesn’t she know how to call the police? Why didn’t she ask to go to the funeral? Ugh. I couldn’t love her.

I felt more sorry for Beth and felt that she was more realistically portrayed. Unfortunately there wasn’t very much of her story, and no depth. How can anyone understand a mother’s grief? Why does she have to move on?

The supernatural in this novel happened too late for me to save it. And really, it just proved the religious righteousness, and then in the end nothing more was made of it. If you read this novel, you’ll understand – but I don’t recommend you read it at all.

I have no complaints about the language, or the world building (although since it is set in what I would call regular times that’s not a big problem). The pacing of this novel was its undoing. Sooooo slow. I tried to keep puttering along with reading it, but nothing significant occurred that anchored me into the reading.

I confess, I did not finish this novel. I have so many other good things to read, I couldn’t force myself to finish it. I got about half-way in, stopped reading for a couple of days, tried to get back into it, and then just read the last three chapters. I can fairly safely say that I didn’t miss anything, since it took a good long many years to get through the rest of the ‘trials and tribulations’.

1star

Review: Jim Carrington – Boy23

Boy23
Jim Carrington

Boy23 is released into the wild with instructions to run. The problem is that he has never been outside before, and has never seen another human. He doesn’t know that other humans might die from coming in contact with him, or that they might want to kill him. All he can do is follow the instructions of The Voice and hope for the best.

23524633The changes between the different perspectives were clear between adults and children, but the two kids, Jesper and Carina, their voices weren’t well defined. I could read one, and because what they saw overlapped, I got confused about how many things had happened.

The idea is interesting, but not unique. I was really looking forward to it, but was left underwhelmed. I am certain I have read other novels of the ‘left outside to fend for yourself’ genre. Not that their names come to mind at the moment. I did at least get all the way through this book in one sitting, which is more than what I can see for the other couple I have been reading (and not yet finished for reviewing).

The ending left me underwhelmed. There was no sign of actual conclusions, and as far as I can see, there is no sequel planned. Now normally that would be ok, but the ending isn’t really a satisfying wrap up of the novel here.

I’ll give it 3 stars – ok, but it’s ok to give this one a miss. There are other novels out there that are equally good or better.

3star

Review: Brigid Kemmerer – Thicker Than Water

Thicker Than Water
Brigid Kemmerer

Thomas has only just moved to town, and already he’s a murderer. Well, take that back. Every single cop in town, including his step-father seems to think he did it. There’s an entrancing girl who wants to give him a chance to prove his innocence… But will he break her too?

23454468Thomas and Charlotte are nicely characterised, and the novel pretty much jump starts itself. I felt like I was feeling every step in the wood, and every single thing Thomas was feeling/thinking/saying. There was a hint of sexual humour, but also thoughtfulness and kindness in there. There was just a few things that bothered me…

I guess they are teenagers. But some teenagers are just not that bright… I mean, really. You really are going against your parents here. Are you incapable of thinking about anything but sex? Then again… I didn’t realise there was going to be a hint of creepiness in this novel. I can’t even tell you about it, because its such a twister you’d never forgive me for spoiling it for you!

It says on the back that Charlotte’s best friend was the other murder victim. Which is not true! Nicole is still alive, and sassy, thank you very much. Don’t trust those blurbs people, just don’t trust them.

Learning about the future would have been nice and all that, but I actually found it to have quite a good ending (I’ve read quite a lot of novels lately where this lets the book down). The novel winds up sensibly. I’m going to be generous and give it 4 stars.

4star

Review: Brandon Sanderson – Words of Radiance

Words of Radiance
Brandon Sanderson

The Everstorm is coming. While the 10 High-Princes quarrel, the Parshmen are plotting their last stand. With scholars trying to crack the secrets of the Shattered Plains, it’s still not apparent who or what will triumph, or if they will all die in the impending storm.

20343865The characters really really get into their strides here. And well they should, as this novel neatly wraps up the first two. I don’t know how I felt about the ending. It was a little neat, but also open ended. I loved Adolin’s final gesture – finally! Get on it boy! Kal, hmm, don’t know what I think about you. Sometimes you are just so dumb, and sometimes you are brilliant.

I love how Sanderson kills off his characters. It gives his novels an edge that makes me want to keep reading. There is nothing worse than series when a character dies, and then is resurrected several chapters or books later. There is an exception that slips itself in, but I’m going to leave that out – plot spoiler!

I wish Sanderson hadn’t needed to waste time finishing The Wheel of Time! People are polarised on whether they like it or not. And if they were coming to read Sanderson’s own work next, I think they would be unfairly biased towards/against it.

As usual, another Brandon Sanderson ripper. I had to restrain myself after reading the first novel in this series to not gobble up this one too quickly. I knew the third novel wasn’t out yet, and who knows when it will be out (2017????), or when I can get a copy? These novels were published 4 years apart…

An easy 5 stars from me. Sanderson and publishers, just take my money and give me everything.

5star

Review: Leah Raeder – Cam Girl

Cam Girl
Leah Raeder

A car accident can change everything – your future, your past and your work. Vada is a talented artist before it is taken from her. And she loses her best friend and partner at the same time. Broke, facing eviction, she will face anything to get her life back.

23430483Ellis is a tortured soul who is only trumped by Vada’s nightmares. Vada is the protagonist, and we see everything from her perspective. What wasn’t obvious to me was why Ellis pulled away after the accident. The blurb is misleading for sure. Just ignore the comments there, and jump into the novel.

This is a properly gritty novel about being one of the LGBT*. It came into my inbox and I ummed and ahhed about whether to request a copy. I had previously read Black Iris, and I hated it. The characters were unrealistic, it was filled with violence and just generally bad. This one is far better, even if it still has some violent scenes and tumultuous sex acts.

I appreciated the positive portrayal of the sex work industry. Time and time again I run into feminists who complain that sex work isn’t treated like a real job. Here it’s no worse than any other job, and it’s a particularly well paid job! Cam girls probably have one of the safer sex work jobs.

The ending didn’t creep up on me too much, and it left me feeling quite satisfied and as if I had just run a long race. Phew. I’d been ripped apart, put back together again, and I was happy-sad.

I’m going to give it 4 stars, which is a complete change from my opinions on her writing before.

4star